Hi Jaxon it's Jennae, I had read your narrative, it was interesting and unique. This was a very good piece of writing. There were some parts in your writing you had put it with a capitial I in the middle of a sentence. You could have a look and fix them. Other than that I enjoyed this peie of writing.
Hi Jaxon it's Jennae,
ReplyDeleteI had read your narrative, it was interesting and unique. This was a very good piece of writing. There were some parts in your writing you had put it with a capitial I in the middle of a sentence. You could have a look and fix them. Other than that I enjoyed this peie of writing.
Kia Pai!
-Jennae