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“Walk With A Wolf” by Janni Howker

Illustrator

Sarah- fox-Davies

“Walk With A Wolf” is a Walker book that is about wolves and how they live.
The genre is animal non fiction about how the wolves live and what they do

The setting is in the mountains, cold lakes, and dark forests of the Yukon territory of
North Western Canada.

The characters in “Walk With A Wolf” are the black male wolf pack leader,
the mother wolf, the pack, the wolf cubs, the moose they hunt for, and a flock of geese
passing by.

The plot is that the wolves are hungry and they have to hunt a moose which is dangerous
because they can kill wolves with a kick. They have to track the moose or try to find
something else .

 

My connection to this book is that it reminded me of my dog Newman because he sleeps
the same as the wolves and he’s a dog which makes him have some of the same
characteristics as them.

My opinion about the story is that I think the story was good because it has very good
punctuation, very good language, lots of rhyme and clines it also has very good artwork
and lots of similes, metaphors and very good adverbs verbs and adjectives.  

I recommend this book to anyone over six because six year old's would not understand
some of the words, punctuation and clines and all the other things like that.

Jaxon's science fiction

Far Cry Valley Of The Yetis

By Jaxon

Ajay Ghale is a Malaysian so is Pagan Min, the royal army soldiers Yuma and the
Golden
Path mercenaries. Willis is an American CIA agent. Ajay Ghale got asked to help
Willis
(CIA agent) to kill some Royal Army commanders. Willis had dropped him off and
sent
him to kill the commanders. But Ajay could not just kill the commanders, he had to
kill the guards too.He started slowly killing the guards one by one with his sound
suppressed gun , but he had to do it quietly when he got to the commander. So he
had to find a way to kill him without getting caught. He saw a bear in a cage so he
silently shot open the lock. The bear ran ferociously over to the commanders and
their guards and quickly killed them.  Ajay’s mission was over, he just needed to
take a picture of the commander for evidence. When he had done that he went
back to the plane where Willis was waiting for him, and Willis told him about
his father. Ajay never knew his father.

Willis said, “Your dad was a patriot.” he pushed Ajay out of the plane and said,
“Your father was a patriot,so you are.”

Willis did not trust patriots. A royal army guard then knocked Ajay out and dragged
to Durgesh prison.

Later on at the royal army lab they were testing human D.N.A on a yeti they found
on the mountains. They decided to try something different. They tried tiger D.N.A.
The yeti went furious and broke out and killed everyone. The yeti ran quickly outside
and into the snow blizzard.

Later Ajay woke up at a prison on the side of the mountain. Pagan Min started to talk to Ajay and said, “It’s sad that you ended up here.”

When Pagan Min finished he left and Yuma injected Ajay and he fell asleep.
An hour later Ajay woke up and they were gone. Ajay had to find a way out
of the prison. He saw a wood plank at the edge of the cell so he walked carefully
across it and found a tunnel, so his hopes were up that he was going to get out
but he saw a shadow of a human like figure it was a demon! so he had to sneak past it.

Later he saw a dead man with a hook in his back and got the idea to make a grapple hook
to escape so he took the hook from the man's back and found some rope,  he went down
the mountain to the prison camp where the exit was. He found his gear, killed the guards
and used his wingsuit to escape.

When he landed he had to go through a blizzard and blacked out, when he
woke slowly he saw a big white figure in the distance, it was a yeti! quickly
he pulled out his buzzsaw (turret like gun) and started shooting at it,

It ran at him with the speed of light, splat! The golden path hit it with their
trucks. Later at the royal palace Pagan Min ordered the royal army to kill the
golden path and get Ajay back to durgesh prison. Later at the golden path base
the royal army started to attack the golden path, the golden path was falling,
but they heard a strange noise and stopped and looked around and saw a horde
of yeti’s running down the road. The yeti’s tore the royal army to shreds.

While they were fighting, the golden path had time to get out of there.
An hour later the golden path had finished planning to attack the royal palace.

Back at the royal palace the golden path split up, three mercenaries went
with Ajay up on the mountains and the rest of the golden path went to the
front gates, boom! they blew the gates open and started attacking, Ajay and
the three mercenaries got there sniper rifles out and shot the alarms so the royal
army could not call for reinforcements. There were bullets everywhere, the royal
army were losing but someone climbed up the mortar tower, aimed, fired  boom! It hit
the ground and crushed the golden path.

Luckily the royal army did not know that Ajay and the three mercenaries were up on
the mountain so Ajay and the mercenaries started shooting the remaining guards, bang!
bang! Bang! The golden path did it, they took out the royal palace, now all that was left
was for Ajay to kill Pagan.

Ajay entered the palace and talked to Ajay, they went to scatter Ajay’s mother’s ashes
with his sister’s (lakshmana). When he finished Pagan told Ajay that he did not have to
liberate all his outpost’s and fortresses to get control of Kyrat (ke-rat).

Kyrat was already his the moment he got there, he said he was going to keep the
helicopter and started to fly away, Ajay grabbed his buzzsaw and shot the helicopter
down.

The End

Ajay Ghale                                                                                 Pagan Min

Willis

C.I.A agent

Quick Writes

This week we are going to work again on ‘Quick Writes.’  This is where you are given something to write about (a writing prompt) and you only have 10 mins to write as much as possible using this writing prompt.

 Here are some of my quick writes

Tomato Pulp

Can you imagine the tomatoes flying everywhere?

When you go home you will be covered in red juice and seeds.

The tomatoes smell rotten like a

te koriri(corny turd) or diarrhea .

When you walk into the tomato fight you are immediately covered in tomatoes.

You would be so exhausted after they day of bullfighting.

It would be so cold with all the tomatoes on you it would be like being in the freezer.

The Stormy Day

Ka taea e koe te whakaaro i nga ngaru ka pakaru i runga i te taiepa waipuke

(Can you imagine the waves crashing on the flood wall).

Or the rain smashing on the ground.  

The wind blowing everything out of it's path.

The thunder and lightning cracking and smashing.

Or the ahi (fire) from the lightning burning all the trees and houses to dust.

Imagine being in that ngaru (storm) .

You would be swept away by the wind and struck by the lighting.

You would be a goner.

Looks like agent orange.

As I go in the bright cloud of orange I start to suffocate.

It was as heavy as one ton.

When I saw it I was blinded by all the colours.

It was as loud as gunfire from a terrorist.

It was like the smell of a volcano just about to erupt.

The Amazing Spooderman

Can you imagine all the people screaming and shouting.

All the Spooderman fans come to the parade.

You would be so squished with all the people there.

The crowd goes wild with all the confetti and balloons.

It would be so loud with everyone there and all the cars and buses.

Persuasive Writing - why we should have pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why we should have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	It's Good To Have Pets
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I definitely believe that it is a really great thing to have pets. It is also  good  to have pets because it is like having a child and you can learn how to look after one.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Have you ever felt what it is like to have a pet? firstly, it is vital to have pets  like a dog or cat because it can save time having to clean up everything. They will clean up any food that is dropped on the floor.  It is also nice to give an animal a home to live in.
	Secondly, it is also good to have pets because you can get food out of them like a chicken can lay eggs or some cows to get milk and with that milk you can make butter and cheese. some dogs can also hunt for food to.
	Furthermore, pets can be very important because they can sense things like cancer. dogs like bloodhounds can also be used for the police and the army. They can also help you if you have a disability.
	In conclusion, pets can be very important to people. they can also be very helpful like guarding you, bringing in the paper or cleaning up your mess. They can be good for disabilities and tracking things.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion we need to fix our field because we don’t have enough room to play, we need our field for sports training and games, we need the field for events like the gala, and it promotes good health and exercise.    It is vital that we have a good field at school.

persuasive writing - Why we should fix our field

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing about why we should fix our field. 

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Fix our mara (field)
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I definitely believe we should fix our mara (field) right this instant! I think we should fix our field because we need it for lots of different things like playing, sports, special events, to have a non muddy field, tournaments, and all the important events like that. For these reasons I think we need to fix our field.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, We need our field to keep fit because it is very important for children to keep fit it also needs to get fixed because it was too muddy and we could not always use it.
	Secondly, we need to fix our field because we need it for things like the gala or the hangi. We also need it because it can hurt people's feet and some people don't like the court and playground.
	Thirdly, We need it to run around and play things like Rippa Rugby. Also we are crowded into half of the the school.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion, we need to fix our field so we can train, and so we can have special events. We also need to fix our mara (field) so it is not so muddy and to do all the important things you need to do on a field! These are the reasons I think we should fix our field.

My Marine Mammal Information Report

We have been learning how to write an information report. Here is my report on a new Zealand marine Mammal.

My Sea Week Writing

For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. Please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment.