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Kia ora JaxonI really like the way you presented your work. The pictures you added attracted my attention. Especially the end picture. Next time you could add a introduction which tells us what you are going to write about. Other wise you have done a great job.
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Kia ora Jaxon
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you presented your work. The pictures you added attracted my attention. Especially the end picture. Next time you could add a introduction which tells us what you are going to write about. Other wise you have done a great job.